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The Fine Print
Review for:
1. Obvious omissions
2. Please give an especially critical look at Part 2: Living the Addiction. Does it rely too much on specific characters? Is there inappropriate content that should be cut?
3. Is there blatant disrespect for God or my wife in the presentation?
4. Too much filler, or content that goes on and on or is completely not needed
5. Is anything unclear to the casual reader?
6. Does a joke fall flat? Come on, you can tell me.
7. Any new ideas?
8. Not necessarily proofreading, but if you see a mistake, feel free to circle it.
9. Does it work? Why, or why not?
THANK YOU! Really, you're beautiful.
The Fine Print
Review for:
1. Obvious omissions
2. Please give an especially critical look at Part 2: Living the Addiction. Does it rely too much on specific characters? Is there inappropriate content that should be cut?
3. Is there blatant disrespect for God or my wife in the presentation?
4. Too much filler, or content that goes on and on or is completely not needed
5. Is anything unclear to the casual reader?
6. Does a joke fall flat? Come on, you can tell me.
7. Any new ideas?
8. Not necessarily proofreading, but if you see a mistake, feel free to circle it.
9. Does it work? Why, or why not?